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Blood Tears-Opening by ~Hyuga-Skyjade:iconHyuga-Skyjade:



   "Haha!  I did it, Sensei!" A young girl stood in the middle of a field, triumphantly punching the air.  Her curly, golden locks bounced every time she jumped, crimson bangs brushing her forehead. "Very good, Sky-chan!" said a man as he quickly ran over to her, a big grin on his face.  His black hair was short and spiky, his eyes a coal black color.  As he stopped, he reached up and adjusted the Konoha headband on his forehead.

   The girl, Skyjade, happily returned her sensei's grin. "I never knew that mastering a Kekkei Genkai would go this easily!" Lifting her hand, she placed her middle and fore-finger right under each of her eyes.  They were crimson, with black lines running from each of them like tear drops. "Chigan, release!" Instantly her eyes turned a bright green color, the black lines disappearing. "It's because you're naturally talented, like Sasuke-kun."

   "Tch.  That arrogant, egotistical bastard?  Please Obito-sensei, don't compare me to him." Obito sighed and rubbed the back of his head, "Well anyway, I've got to go and meet up with the other sensei.  You should get dressed and go hang out with Jzla and Briser, m'kay?" Smiling, he reached over and ruffled her hair, "Bye!" In a puff of smoke, he was gone.

   Sighing, Sky bent over and scooped up her shirt; she had been training in a white jogging bra and black baggy pants.  Quickly she pulled her shirt on.  It was white with long sleeves that opened up like a kimono's.  Reaching into her pocket, she pulled out her headband and tied it around her neck. "There!  Now to find those teammates of mine and get them to buy me a drink!" With a smile, she ran from the field towards the village of Konohagakure.
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Ok, this is the opening to my fanfic Blood Tears. Old fans, Sky is now from Konoha, and there will be other changes.

Now, before I get yelled at by anyone hating the idea of Obito being alive...Go away and stop reading if it bothers you. There will be other plot time shifts, like Sasuke leaves before Itachi and Kisame come for Naruto. Other than that, I won't be messing with much of the plot timeline.

Oh and could someone please tell me what the plural of 'sensei' is?

Enjoy!

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]

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~phillip666:iconphillip666: Mar 8, 2008, 10:53:00 PM
Just a lit choppy. And watch the "be" verbs: am is are was were. Especially "was".

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~Hyuga-Skyjade:iconHyuga-Skyjade: Mar 8, 2008, 11:12:37 PM
I am a sucker for 'be' verbs...Haha...

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